Don't
Judge A Book By It's Cover
Rodney and Bridgette Atkins have
been going through the hardest few months of their life. They just needed to
get out of the house and go somewhere else to relieve their stress. Bridgette
was diagnosed pregnant two months ago and has been having a rough time with it.
Rodney lost his job three months ago and also has been grieving with the loss
of his father. In order to escape reality they chose to take a vacation to New
York City.
"Rodney," Bridgette
proclaimed, "we're almost out of fuel." They were so close to New
York City but were now stuck in a suburb near by. Rodney answered, "We'll
be ok, we'll make it," knowing that there was not enough gas to make it
there. In just a couple of minutes the car started to stop moving. They were
stopped in the middle of street. Rod hopped out of the car and with all the
power he could muster started to push the car of the road. The entire car was
almost off the road then Crack.
Something in his back had broken, Bridgette dashed out of the car towards him.
"Are you alright," she wavered. "Yes I'm fine," he replied.
He stood up trying to mask his pain but released a loud grunt and fell back to
the ground. They couldn't worry about that right now though they had to find
gas or a tow truck driver. Luckily their was a phone booth nearby. The entire
booth was graffitied with gang slang and other things that they did not
understand at all. Bridgette got in and looked through the phone book which was
missing hundreds of pages. She decided to call the operator thankfully the
operator answered. She asked the
operator to contact the nearest tow truck. Once Bridgette was in hold with the
tow truck she asked them to come get their car and the man replied that it
would take around 20 minutes. Bridgette was so thankful. Her and Rod could
finally get out of this place. They both got back into the car and sat there
waiting, and waiting, and waiting. It had been almost an hour and no one had
come yet, but this was their only chance of getting out of there so they waited
even longer. They sat there listening to the sounds of gun shots and sirens
scared out of their minds. They almost gave up but then someone one pulled up
behind them.
An older man pulled up in an old
beat up tow truck. Rust covered every inch of it and it didn't even look like
it could tow a smart car. The man stepped out of the truck we was one of the
creepiest guys they had ever seen. He was around 250 pounds but only 5'6 tall.
He was African American, missing several teeth, and had a lazy eye. He came
over to the car and knocked on the window. "Hello there, I'm here to tow
your car. My name is Christopher," he said with a lisp. Then he leaned in
the car and said, " I only have room for one person to come with me so
please decide." Rod looked over to Bridgette and quietly said, "I
think it's safer to stay in the car, I'll go." He jumped out of the car
while Bridgette was worrying so badly. Christopher hooked up the car while Rod
jumped into the tow truck. Once they were done they drove away. Bridgette ran
into the middle of the street and yelled, "Hurry back," as her
husband drove down the street with the weird man. She had no idea when he would
return, hopefully just twenty minutes, she didn't think she could wait any
longer without the car.
It had already been an hour and
Bridgette sat there on the freezing ground waiting for her husband to return.
She kept putting thoughts into her head like how something might have happened
to Rodney or maybe the old piece of junk tow truck broke down. She started to
drive herself crazy on how long it was taking them to get back. When she had
finally lost hoped the tow truck finally came back with the car and Rodney. As
soon as Rodney got out she ran to him asking him, "Are you hurt. Did
everything go ok. Did he hurt you." Rodney just smiled and said, "Yes
I'm alright. It turns out Christopher is a very nice man. He fixed our car free
of charge. It even turns out that he is a minister at the church he works
at." Bridgette was so surprised she thought the man was a thief or
something. She wanted to go thank Christopher but he was already on his way.
Rodney and Bridgette finally got to
go on their trip to New York and it was the greatest time of their lives. When
they got home they decided that they were going to volunteer at their church
for anything that they needed. Christopher had done such a simple task to help
the Atkins but they took it to heart and it changed their lives forever.
Great story! So desriptive!
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